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 ==Profile==
-Whoosh! As a beetle zips by, Isaki dives headfirst into the grass.
+Whoosh! A beetle zips by, and Isaki dives headfirst into the tall grass.
-Thud! Another tumble. He's narrowly missed his prized beetle again.
+Thud! Another tumble. He narrowly misses his prized beetle again.
-But with a grin, he brushes the grass from his head and takes off once more. Failure? It means nothing to him. He's got the courage it takes to keep going.<ref>[https://planet.hoyoverse.com/en-us/home Official Petit Planet Website]</ref>
+But with a grin, he plucks the grass from his hair and dashes off once more. Failure? It means nothing to him. He's got all the courage he needs to keep up the chase.<ref>[https://planet.hoyoverse.com/en-us/home Official Petit Planet Website]</ref>
 ==Aptitudes==